THE INTRODUCTORY PARAGRAPH

“Large cars”
The large cars are the worse cars in the world because they pollute a lot. 

“Living in a remote area”
Living in a remote area is a really good thing because you can get a lot of peace

“Studying abroad”
Studying abroad could be very difficult for some people, so everyone should have the chance of studying near to her houses.

“The candy bar diet”
the candy bar diet is not a very effective diet because is bad for the body and the healt eat only candy. 

“National holidays”
Those days are so great for the most of the people because they can spend more time with their family and have some days off of work. 

Exercise 1
Write support sentences for these topic sentences to create a cohesive and coherent paragraph.

Large cars create a lot of difficulty on our streets.
Large cars are not very goood for us, they use a lot of space in the street so they make a mess in the streets when there is so much of those cars together. They create a lot of traffic and make everything more difficult, people gets stressed and moody. Also they pollute a lot.
On the other hand, they can be really useful because in a single one large car you can transport a lot of people, so this could be helpful to the environment and people can save some money 


Living in a remote area can make a person’s life rather challenging.

This could be a challenge because the remote areas are so far away from everything. You can't go to the cinema or to the mall everyday like you do in the city. Also, there's no so much people or civilization. 
On the other hand, living there could be really 
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